Sunday, 9 September 2012

The Exciting Guide to The Sensorites

Really, I ought to be covering a story involving Dinosaurs to tie in with the screening of "Dinosaurs On A Spaceship" yesterday - but at least this one has a mysterious spaceship under threat from the nearby planet. The Sensorites doesn't exactly have the best reputation in the world. But, interestingly, I reacted to it more positively than one might have expected. Remember, this was 1999 and I haven't re-read the entry since, so the final review and rating came as a surprise to me in 2012. Let's keep an open mind.

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Story Seven
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Story Code
G

Title
The Sensorites

“Friends” Title
The One With The Round Feet
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Episode Titles
Strangers In Space
The Unwilling Warriors
Hidden Danger
A Race Against Death
Kidnap
A Desperate Venture

Current availability
All six episodes exist.

Source
UK Gold omnibus repeat transmission.
End credits seem to have been created especially for this transmission.  This is another of UK Gold’s occasional quirks which I shall not mention again.
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Date
2750.
Carol, John and Maitland come from the twenty-eighth century, which must set this story somewhere between about 2700 and 2800.

Genre
Alien culture.

Plot synopsis
1.         The Ship has landed on a spaceship in orbit around a planet called the Sense-Sphere.  Its pilots - Maitland and Carol Richmond - are unable to leave, as the Sensorites who inhabit the world are controlling their ship and their minds.  The TARDIS crew save them when the ship is put into freefall, but a Sensorite steals the lock from the TARDIS, trapping them on the ship.  Barbara and Susan bump into John, the third crewmember and Carol’s fiancé, whose mind has been disturbed by his experiences.  A high-pitched whine signals the approach of a Sensorite travel machine, and one of the aliens is spied outside the viewing port.
2.         The intruding Sensorites try to make John attack Barbara and Susan, but the women return their telepathic attack by concentrating on the words “we defy you.”  The travellers are reunited, and deduce that mineralogist John discovered that the Sense-Sphere is rich in the valuable mineral molybdenum, hence his attack being much worse than those on Maitland and Carol.  The Sensorites arrange a parley via Susan, and explain that they won’t let any of them leave because Earthmen have betrayed them in the past.  They start to take Susan away to the planet, threatening to kill the others if she doesn’t co-operate.
3.         The crew turn the lights off, which renders the Sensorites powerless.  After much further discussion, it is agreed that Barbara and Maitland will remain on the ship, while the others will go down to the Sense-Sphere:  John will be cured, and they will negotiate for the release of the ships.  It is explained that ten years ago, an Earth expedition discovered the molybdenum, but since their ship exploded, the Sensorites have been dying in their thousands.  The planetary Elders argue over the decision to allow the humans to land:  the City Administrator attempts to kill the aliens with the Disintegrator, but is prevent just in time by the Second Elder.  Whilst talking to the First Elder, Ian suddenly collapses with the disease - the Elder says he will die.
4.         The Doctor deduces the water is to blame - the Elders drink a different water, which is why they are unaffected.  He creates an antidote, but this is intercepted on its way to Ian by the Administrator, whose paranoid fear of the outsiders has led him to capture the Second Elder and use his sash to impersonate him.  Susan fetches more, and Ian begins to recover.  Meanwhile, the Doctor goes to investigate the aqueduct, despite the Sensorites’ belief that monsters live there.  He finds the cause of the poisoning - Deadly Nightshade - but hears a roar nearby.
5.         Ian and Susan rescue the Doctor, whose coat has been torn by something.  Realising that one of the Sensorites bears them ill will, they go back to the city to find out who.  The Administrator blackmails the Second Elder into supplying him with the Disintegrator key once more, but the Elder destroys it, and the Administrator’s accomplice kills him.  This Sensorite claims to the First Elder that the Doctor killed him, but his story is seen through thanks to the Doctor’s enforced change of apparel.  Suspicion falls on the late Second Elder as the travellers’ enemy, and ironically they suggest the City Administrator as his replacement.  Too late, John (now fully cured) tells them he overheard the Administrator plotting against them.  The Doctor and Ian return to the aqueduct:  however, the new Second Elder tampers with their weapons and map.  Meanwhile, in the city, Carol is kidnapped.
6.         Carol is forced to write a note claiming she has returned to the ship, but Barbara has just come down, so this is seen through.  John and the Sensorite Senior Warrior rescue her.  Barbara and John go to look for the Doctor and Ian, keeping in touch with Susan using a Sensorite mind transmitter.  The Doctor and Ian, meanwhile, have discovered survivors from the old Earth expedition, who have been poisoning the water for ten years, quite insane, believing themselves to be at war.  They are captured.  The villainous Sensorite is discovered thanks to his alterations to the map, and is banished to the outer wastes.  The TARDIS lock is returned, and Maitland and his crew take the insane humans back to Earth.  Ian annoys the Doctor, who threatens to put him off the Ship at the next stop.

Pitch
A story proving you should never drink the water when abroad.

The Money Shot
A Sensorite appears at the viewing port.  (Episode 1)

The Doctor and his kind
• Susan waxes lyrical about her home planet:  “Grandfather and I don’t come from Earth.  It’s ages since we’ve seen our planet.  It’s quite like Earth, but at night the sky is a burnt orange, the leaves on the trees are bright silver.”
• Once again, as in An Unearthly Child, the Doctor and Susan’s comments suggest they’d like to return home.
• Susan appears to have a gift for telepathy, and the Doctor claims he sometimes knows what his companions are thinking.  Susan’s abilities seem more proficient than his, but probably only when aided by the extraordinarily high Ultra High Frequencies on the Sense-Sphere.
• Does the above suggest that possible the Doctor and Susan’s home planet also has extraordinarily high Ultra High Frequencies?  Do people there communicate by telepathy too?
• The Doctor speaks out against weapons, but ambivalently.  “I have never liked weapons of any kind, but they’re handy little things.”

The TARDIS log
• Ian notes that the static on the scanners could have been caused by an unsupressed motor.  The Doctor suggests a magnetic field.  Cam we take it the scanner is nothing more than a telly?
• Despite how complex it is constantly made out to be, the TARDIS lock can be cut off, producing a burning smell!  In fact, the entire opening mechanism is removed, permanently locking the door.  At least the Sensorites do acknowledge that the lock is “an electronic miracle.”
• The Doctor’s comments suggest the door could be broken down, but to do so would discharge the dimensions within the Ship (i.e. bad.)

Past Journies
• The Doctor and Susan have presumably visited the planet Esto (see Alien Worlds.)

The history of Earth
• In the twenty eighth century, the whole lower half of England is now Central City - there has not been a London for four hundred years (or a Big Ben!)  And Earth still has too much air traffic.
• The people of Earth clearly still get engaged and married.

Alien Worlds
• The Sense-Sphere is a planet rich in the mineral molybdenum, a fact which the indigenous Sensorites wish to keep to themselves.  It also has extraordinarily high levels of Ultra High Frequencies (or did I already mention that?)
• The Sensorites are virtually identical semi-humanoids.  They look a bit like caricatures of wise old men...but have circular, flat feet.  They all wear nondescript tunics.
• They speak much as we do, but have also developed a method of telepathy using small transmitter discs which they place against their foreheads.  Even Barbara is able to use one of these, so their own abilities are probably limited to being able to hear what other Sensorites are transmitting.
• Their irises contract in the dark, making them very vulnerable to lack of light.
• They also cannot stand loud noises of any kind.
• Sensorites’ hearts are in the centre of their chests.
• The planet is ruled by two Elders.  The First Elder wears two sashes to mark him out, the Second only one.
• The Elders are at the head of a strict caste system:  “The Elders think and rule, the Warriors fight, and the Sensorites work and play.”  An example of the distinctions made is that the Elders drink the Crystal Water, while everyone else makes do with the everyday water from the aqueduct.
• The Sensorites claim their society is based on trust, making treason and plotting impossible.  The Senior Scientist describes it as the perfect society, with all contented.  This, of course, is easily shown to be a trifle naive.
• Their space travel ability is limited to being able to nip back and forth to the spaceship in orbit.
• Somehow, as seen in the cliffhanger to Strangers In Space, the Sensorites seem able to survive in the vacuum of space.
• According to Susan, the planets on the planet Esto use thought transference.  If you stand in between two of them, they let off a screeching noise.

Script Heaven
• The Doctor “Yes, it all started off as a mild curiosity in the junkyard, and now it’s turned out to be quite a...quite a great spirit of adventure, don’t you think?”
• The Doctor “No, Barbara.  I learned not to meddle in other people’s affairs years ago.  Now, now, now, don’t be absurd.  There’s not an ounce of curiosity in me, my dear boy.  Tell me, why are you in danger?”
• Carol “You’re very strange people.” Susan “Are we?” Carol “Well, you come from nowhere, and you seem to be going nowhere.”
• Carol “Do you know who I am?” John “You’re good.”
• Carol “It’s rather like an eyelid.  These shutters over my eyes.” Scientist “Yes.  To see all the time is...not a good thing.”
• Administrator “Weakling!  Betrayer of our people!  Coward!  I should imprison you in some room wherein no light can shine and fill that room with noise!”
• Ian “Oh, and...congratulations.” New Second Elder “When you address one of the Elders, you call him sir.”

Script Hell
• Ian “There’s one thing about it, Doctor, we’re certainly different from when we started out with you.” Susan “That’s funny, grandfather and I were talking about that just before you came in.  How you’ve both changed.” Barbara “Oh, we’ve all changed.” Susan “Have I?” Barbara “Yes!”  And so on, and so on...honestly, this belongs at the end of an episode of He-Man.
• The Doctor “You know, I think these Sensorites have found the way to take control of your mind.”  No shit, Sherlock.  You don’t have to spell everything out for us.
• Susan “That must have looked funny!  Flip-flap, flip-flap...”  Someone shoot this child, please.
• The Doctor “Yes, but the fact is that you didn’t kill him.  Shows great promise for the future of your people.”  Patronising arse!

Name-dropping
• The Doctor claims to have met Henry VIII.  He threw a parson’s nose at the King and was sent to the Tower - where the TARDIS was parked!
• He also claims to have met Beau Brummel, who said he looked better in a cloak.

The Doctor’s Achievement
The cause of the Sensorites’ ten-year affliction has been discovered and nullified.  All the humans are allowed to go home, and John is cured.

Things I learned from Doctor Who
• What a spectrograph is.
• Iron melts at 1,539˚C.  Molybdenum melts at 2,622˚C.
• Cats can see better in the dark than humans because their irises dilate at night.
• The symptoms of atropine poisoning.

Body Count
Only the Second Elder buys it in this story.
1.

Screams / Twists Ankle
• This is Ian and Barbara’s first foray into their own planet’s future.  True to form, they act like the worst kind of tourists - “Is Big Ben still on time” indeed!

Checkov’s Plot Device
Checkov’s Previous Earth Expedition.

EffectsWatch
• The model shot of Maitland’s ship flying off is pretty good, considering.

The TARDIS wardrobe
• The Doctor’s jacket is ruined in the tunnels, but he says he has more in the Ship.

Dudley!
• Classic stuff here.  Ian feels Maitland’s pulse and proclaims him “Dead.”  DA-DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!
• “Will he let me into my ship, I wonder?”  DA-DA-DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!!!!

Whoops
• There is a plethora of line fluffing on display here.  The Administrator’s accomplice is heard to say “I heard them over, over...t-t-talking.”  But honours go to William Hartnell, not only for “The First Elder...Scientist, I mean...” but also for reading “-INEER” as “I-N-N-E-R.”

Notes
• There is a bizarre scene near the beginning when the crew all pat themselves on the backs for being in such an interesting series and patronise the audience silly before re-capping on the story so far.  What was the writer thinking?  See first entries in Script Hell and Script Heaven.
• The travellers do seem to be getting along very well by this stage (the final scene notwithstanding).
• Putting the travellers’ exact relationship down on paper quite startlingly, Barbara states that they depend on the Doctor:  he leads, and they follow.  Quite a contrast from the power-jockeying of An Unearthly Child.
• Again, one of the leads (Jacqueline Hill, this time) goes on holiday for a couple of episodes.
• For the first time, we pass through the TARDIS doors along with the travellers.
• Maitland’s ship, espied on the scanner at the end, is the series’ first “real” spaceship.
• I love the bit where Susan stands up to the Doctor.  “Dictated to by petty thieves and my own granddaughter!”  Beautiful.  She appears to be growing up and out of his shadow (“I’m not a child any more.”)  The Doctor claims this is their first argument in all their years of travel.  Maybe all this is going to make her less annoying.  Maybe.
• I don’t like John’s ability (according to Susan) to tell good and evil people apart.  It’s altogether too convenient.
• There’s a lovely scene between Susan (again!  Good grief!) and the First Elder in which her wanderlust and homesickness are both highlighted.  It concludes with her speculating that they’ll all go home one day.
• Whatever Barbara says, it seems to me that the Administrator’s ambition is secondary to a desire to save his planet from the outsiders fuelled by irrational hatred.
• Men in the future wear Seiko kinetic watches.  You see?  Some day, all watches will be made this way!
• After the Doctor defended Ian in The Keys Of Marinus, the positions are here reversed when the Doctor is accused of murdering the Second Elder.
• Once again, the crew are willing to just leave the people they meet to their fate, and only stop when they are cut off from their Ship.

Queries
• Why are Carol and Maitland not surprised to meet twentieth century citizens?
• How did the Sensorites know how to deal with the TARDIS lock?
• And how did they get to it in the first place without that high-pitched whine being heard? (Unless we are to presume that one of the two Sensorites was already on board before the TARDIS landed, and only the second one arrived at the end of Strangers In Space.)
• Why does the Sensorite at the Disintegrator have to explain about the heat sensors to the City Administrator?  What sort of an administrator is he?
• The Warriors fight.  Who do they fight, if all Sensorites trust each other and they don’t yet have space travel?  Who is the Disintegrator gun generally used against?  What is the point of the heat sensors?
• Where, precisely, does the Deadly Nightshade come from?  Or is it just parallel evolution?
• Are the humans very convincing roarers, or do they have a cassette player handy?
• Where, exactly, are the TARDIS crew when they watch Maitland’s ship go off?  Have they made the Ship just hop off into space for the sake of waving goodbye, or what?

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On-screen Credits
Taken from The Television Companion.
CAST
Dr. Who - William Hartnell, Ian Chesterton - William Russell, Barbara Wright - Jacqueline Hill, Susan Foreman - Carole Ann Ford, John - Stephen Dartnell, Carol - Ilona Rodgers, Maitland - Lorne Cossette (1-3), First Sensorite - Ken Tyllsen (2-3), Second Sensorite - Joe Greig (2-3), First Elder - Eric Francis (3-6), Second Elder - Bartlett Mullins (3-5), City Administrator - Peter Glaze (3-6), First Scientist - Ken Tyllsen (4-5), Second Scientist  - Joe Greig (4), Warrior - Joe Greig (5-6), Sensorites - Arthur Newall (3-6), Anthony Rogers (3-6), Gerry Martin (3-5).
CREW
Written by Peter R Newman.  Title Music by Ron Grainer and the BBC Radiophonic Workshop.  Incidental Music by Norman Kay.  Costumes - Daphne Dare.  Make-up - Jill Summers; Sonia Markham (6).  Studio Lighting - Peter Murray.  Studio Sound - Les Wilkins; Jack Brummitt.  Production Assistant - David Conroy.  Assistant Floor Manager - Val McCrimmon; Dawn Robertson.  Story Editor - David Whitaker.  Designer - Raymond P Cusick.  Associate Producer - Mervyn Pinfield.  Producer - Verity Lambert.  Directed by Mervyn Pinfield (1-4); Frank Cox (5-6).

Familiar Faces
Peter Glaze was later to be better known being less villainous on the children’s programme Crackerjack (Crackerjack!)
Stephen Dartnell (John)                   Yartek in The Keys Of Marinus.

Review
There is an awful lot to praise in this six-parter.  It’s really an impressive attempt to present an alien society (if a little simplistic - the caste system, near-identical appearances and minimal locations are a bit of a cop-out).  Giving the line “To them, we may appear ugly” to a Sensorite is a nice touch, and on the whole it is a wonderful balance, if a little let down by the Doctor’s patronising “Yes, well done, you’re almost as good as normal people now” attitude in the final episode, an attitude from much pulp science fiction suffers.  The aliens are, by and large, well-written, especially the First Elder - Eric Francis gives an excellent performance, understated yet refusing to be outclassed by Peter Glaze, having a whale of a time as the baddy.  The two groups of humans are less convincing, although mention must go to Stephen Dartnell, whose broken-minded spaceman steals the honours in the first three episodes.  The leads, however, after a fairly absurd start (I must repeat, what the hell was going on there?) are more than serviceable - Ian and Barbara are incapacitated for about half of the action, leaving William Hartnell to take centre stage, and despite fluffing his lines a little too often, he rises to the occasion, with a well-scripted and more than usually well-delivered set of episodes.  Of course, much attention is paid over the course of the story to Susan, against whom I have been slowly taking a dislike to date.  But to be fair, she spends almost the entire story not being annoying, and as is noted above, has a number of actually rather good scenes - unfortunately, this is all scuppered by the hideous “flip-flap” moment.  Ouch.  Anyway, on the whole the story overcomes plot holes, restrictive face masks, obvious lack of rehearsal time and occasionally rather intrusive incidental music to present a pleasingly ambitious take on an entirely alien culture, in a far more sensible and less action-oriented way than The Daleks tried to do, and one scarcely notices that sod all really happens until the third episode.  Oddly, however, it’s not a story I feel myself particularly tempted to return to, and despite its ambitions, the whole thing seems a little... pedestrian.  And they really should have given Peter Glaze a final scene.

Rating: 6 / 10
 

Sunday, 2 September 2012

The Exciting Guide to The Aztecs

Alright, so everyone's busy thinking about "Asylum of the Daleks" at the moment and possibly historical action from 1964 isn't on the top of your agenda. But here it is anyway.

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Story Six
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Story Code
F

Title
The Aztecs

“Friends” Title
The One With The Human Sacrifice
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Episode Titles
The Temple Of Evil
The Warriors Of Death
The Bride Of Sacrifice
The Day Of Darkness

Current availability
All four episodes exist.

Source
BBC Video release.
Apparently intact apart from the “Next Episode” caption at the end of “The Day Of Darkness”, which has been deleted.  This seems a minor quibble, and I shan’t bother complaining about it again.
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Date
1435.
The priest in the tomb died, according to Barbara, circa 1430, as his belongings are from the “early period.”  He has presumably not been dead too long - at any rate, this is certainly before 1520, when Cortez landed and killed everybody.

Genre
Historical.

Plot synopsis
1.         The TARDIS lands in an Aztec tomb.  The travellers accidentally discover a hidden door, which closes behind them, cutting them off from the Ship.  Barbara has donned a bracelet from within the tomb, and is mistaken for the Goddess Yetaxa by Autloc, High Priest Of Knowledge.  The others are taken for her servants.  The Doctor is taken to the Garden of Peace, and forms a friendship with a lady named Cameca.  Ian is chosen to command the army, and must prove his worth against Ixta.  He learns he is to aid in the upcoming sacrifice ordered by Tlotoxl, High Priest Of Sacrifice, to appease the Gods and bring rain to the land.  Despite the Doctor’s objections, Barbara interferes with the sacrifice, hoping to change the Aztec civilisation for the better and thus save them from Cortez.  The intended victim is appalled that she has denied him honour, and leaps to his death.  Rain comes.  Tlotoxl accuses Barbara of being a false goddess and says he will destroy her.
2.         The Doctor tears a strip off Barbara for her interference.  Susan is sent to a seminary to learn respect for the Aztec customs - her modern attitudes soon cause difficulties.  Barbara warns Autloc that continuing the tradition of human sacrifice will bring doom upon his people.  Ian shows his mettle by felling Ixta with his thumb, and the Perfect Victim - who will be sacrificed in a few days when the sun goes into eclipse - orders an unarmed match between the two.  Ixta gets aid from the Doctor, who does not realise his opponent will be Ian - he hopes to exchange his help for drawings Ixta’s architect father made of the tomb he built.  Ixta uses a poisoned thorn to win the fight, but Barbara commands him to stop before he can kill Ian.  Tlotoxl challenges her to make him stop.
3.         Barbara prevents Ian’s death by threatening Tlotoxl’s life.  No victory is declared in the contest.  She persuades Autloc to side with her, despite his misgivings for his future should she prove false.  Ixta reveals there are no blueprints of the tomb.  Ian manages to convince Barbara that she cannot change the Aztecs, that civilised Autloc is the odd man out rather than barbaric Tlotoxl.  Barbara is offered a poisoned draught by Tlotoxl and Tonila, but rumbles them.  She admits her falseness to Tlotoxl, but threatens to destroy him if he speaks against her.  Through his machinations, the Perfect Victim proposes marriage to Susan, who refuses, this breaking the law - she is to be mutilated on the day of darkness.  Meanwhile the Doctor makes cocoa for Cameca and accidentally becomes engaged.  He and Ian find an entrance to the tomb - Ian enters the tunnel, but Ixta replaces the stone, trapping Ian as the tunnel fills with water.
4.         Ian finds another way out, which leads to the room where the Ship still waits.  He is reunited with Barbara and the Doctor, and rescues Susan from under Ixta’s guard.  The companions try to access the tomb by pulling on a fabric lever Ian has created - it breaks.  Meanwhile, Tlotoxl orders Ixta to attack Autloc with Ian’s weapon - Ian and Susan find his body just in time to be arrested, and Autloc proclaims Barbara as false.  Tlotoxl plans to dispose of her on the day of darkness.  On said day, the Doctor creates a pulley wheel (being an invention the Aztecs never mastered) and admits to his fiancée that he is leaving.  Autloc and Barbara are reconciled:  the High Priest goes into the wilderness to seek truth, leaving the badge of his position for Cameca to bribe the man guarding Ian and Susan.  Tlotoxl discovers their disappearance and tries to kill Barbara before the ceremony:  Ian blocks him and confronts Ixta - in the ensuing fight, Ixta is thrown off the temple to his death.  The four companions make their escape using the pulley wheel, and Tlotoxl makes the sacrifice at the hour of the eclipse.  When the TARDIS lands once more, the instruments register movement.  Are they on top of something or inside it?

Pitch
Doctor Who teaches little-known pieces of history.

The Money Shot
Barbara turns round to the Doctor wearing the head-dress of Yetaxa. (Episode 1)

The Doctor and his kind
• “You are a healer?” asks Cameca.  “No, no, “ replies the Doctor, “they call me the Doctor.  I am a scientist and engineer, I am a builder of things.”  Is this how the Doctor sees himself, or just a ruse to gain knowledge about the temple?
• It is nice to see in this story that the Doctor is as capable of tender emotions as any of us - it is perhaps most obvious that it is not all just play-acting in the final episode.  He looks close to tears when he and Cameca finally part.
• The Doctor keeps the brooch with Yetaxa’s symbol on it given to him by Cameca - after a moment’s hesitation.

The history of Earth
• Mexico in the fifteenth century was populated by the Aztec civilisation, who were a people with a great love of beauty and learning, who also happened to believe in human sacrifice.  When Cortez and his Spanish fleet invaded in 1520, they took one look at the apparently barbaric people slaughtering each other on rocks and wiped them out.  The good and bad aspects of the Aztecs were lost forever.

Script Heaven
• The Doctor “You can’t rewrite history!  Not one line!”
• Ian “Where did you get this?”  The Doctor “My fiancée.”  Ian “I see...your what?” The Doctor “Yes, I made cocoa and got engaged.”
• The Doctor “There you are, my dear, it’s nearly finished.”  Cameca “As is our time together.  I do not know what its purpose is, but I’ve always known it would take you away from me.”  The Doctor “Yes, I’m sorry, my dear.”  Cameca “Tomorrow will truly be a day of darkness.”  The Doctor “For both of us.”  Cameca “Tlotoxl is determined to destroy Yetaxa.”  The Doctor “He must do, to safeguard his own beliefs.”  Cameca “We are a doomed people, my dear.  There’s no turning back for us.”  The Doctor “You are a very fine woman, Cameca, and you’ll always be very very dear to me.”

The Doctor’s Achievement
• Not one jot.  In fact, they discuss this at the end of the story.  “What’s the point of travelling through time and space, we can’t change anything,” says Barbara.  The Doctor argues that they have effect in little ways - “He [Autloc] found another faith, a better, and that’s the good you’ve done.  You failed to save a civilisation, but you helped one man.”  Well, that’s one point of view.  Another might be that Autloc was quite happy before they turned up, and now he’s lost everything he held dear and is wandering in the wilderness.  Metaphorically, the same can be said for Cameca.

Body Count
The first victim, the guard in episode 4, Ixta and the Perfect Victim.  The dead priest in the tomb doesn’t count!
4.

Screams / Twists Ankle
• One of Barbara’s specialist subjects in History was the Aztec civilisation.  Handy, that.  I wonder what her others were.
• Ian knows self-defence - he can defeat Ixta with his thumb.
• Actually, Ian shows a propensity for violence throughout this story.  He abandons Cameca’s attempts at bribery in favour of hitting the guard - and, in a joyous moment, actually nuts Ixta in the face!
• Susan’s apparent love of learning, which previously landed her at Coal Hill School, rears its head here - she seems very dedicated at the seminary.

Checkov’s Plot Device
Checkov’s Wheel...in a sense, anyway.  Correct me if I’m wrong, but the Doctor does mention in episode one that they never invented the wheel, and then uses a pulley wheel to escape three episodes later.

EffectsWatch
• Note the painfully slowly choreographed fight sequence in episode 1.

Dudley!
• Great music here, with two distinct types (one for dramatic sequences such as the fight in episode 4, the other mainly used in the Garden of Peace sequences).  Sounds “authentically Aztec” - or good, at any rate.  Atmospheric.

Whoops
• When Ian ties the fabric to the stone wall in episode 4, the set wobbles noticeably.

Notes
• All right, episode titles are getting a bit silly now, aren’t they?  First take “The”, then a feature of the episode, then “of”, then finally a random adjective.
• Tlotoxl speaks directly to camera at the end of episode 1, a first for the show.  Not necessarily a good first, but a first nonetheless.
• The scene at the start of episode 2 where the Doctor yells at Barbara is really great, possibly the best piece of interplay between the leads yet shown.
• It is also a joy to see the Doctor flirting shamelessly with Cameca.  Note that he picks her out immediately for no readily apparent reason - clearly he just fancies her!
• Carole Ann Ford’s sparse appearances in the middle episodes are because it was her turn to go on holiday.

Queries
• Would the Doctor and Cameca actually have been sexually compatible?

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On-screen Credits
CAST
Dr. Who - William Hartnell, Ian Chesterton - William Russell, Barbara Wright - Jacqueline Hill, Susan Foreman - Carole Ann Ford, Autloc - Keith Pyott, Tlotoxl - John Ringham, Ixta - Ian Cullen, Cameca - Margot Van Der Burgh, Tonila - Walter Randall (2-4), Perfect Victim - André Boulay (2-4), First Victim - Tim Booth (1), Aztec Captain - David Anderson.
CREW
Written by John Lucarotti.  Title Music by Ron Grainer with the BBC Radiophonic Workshop.  Incidental Music by Richard Rodney Bennett.  Conductor - Marcus Dods.  Fights arranged by David Anderson (4).  Costumes by Daphne Dare (4).  Make-Up Supervisor - Jill Summers (4).  Story Editor - David Whitaker.  Designer - Barry Newbury.  Associate Producer - Mervyn Pinfield.  Producer - Verity Lambert.  Directed by John Crockett.

Review
What a change of pace.  This is exactly what a Doctor Who historical should be - realistically portrayed, well-researched, beautifully-scripted and with a strong moral sting.  It’s not perfect by any means - the casual viewer might easily find their attention slipping, and not all the set pieces work as they might.  This story benefits immensely from the four regulars at their strongest yet - Jacqueline Hill in particular has far more to do here, and makes the most of her rôle as a goddess.  The four each get their own slivers of plot to deal with, all of which dovetail impressively so that nothing seems superfluous (with the possible exception of the Susan/Perfect Victim sub-sub-subplot).  Using a wheel to enter the tomb, having mentioned in episode one that the Aztecs never discovered the wheel, is an especially nice touch.  John Ringham provides a worthy villain, but the supporting honours are stolen by Keith Pyott’s troubled priest and Margot Van Der Burgh’s ageing lady in need of affection.  The subplot involving the Doctor’s engagement is unexpectedly touching, and full marks for deviating enough from the expected path to include it.  Lest anyone think that the moral ambiguity was disappearing from the series, this story should dispel such fears.  The Doctor and Ian are here forced to set themselves against Barbara’s attempts to end human sacrifice, while she tricks and deceives Autloc into helping her, much as the Doctor manipulates his fiancée.  A well-crafted gentler tale, with subtle overtones of horror.  Nice one.

Rating
8 / 10